ChimeraMania

Oh wow, wish there was more to this chapter it was amazing. I was wondering when we'd hear from them. Although again, I feel it doesn't match the lengths of ...

Hello, I'm here for a review. I read chapter one and two. I just couldn't stop reading and although I was late on the other one, looks like I'm only ...

YAY!!!! I'm here and this is better than I expected. No these are a few things that caught my eye. Without my second sight, words meant nothing. Nor was there ...

Well, this chapter was definitely an interesting twisted knowledgeable chapter. Although this isn't as long as the last chapter it's a good length, but I do have a problem with ...

All, that was, except tactile. And feel it I did. I am very curious to what this line means. I'm not going to exaggerate. Your use of the word exaggerate, ...

So first of all, I really like this. Hopefully, you keep me updated after I read the first chapter. Now secondly, you have way too many commas here. When you ...

Okay, so I've read all the chapters. I like where I feel this will go I really do but I feel like you're missing a lot of information. We only ...

OHHHHHH, I really have to go read the other chapters. I just ask that you keep me updated for when you post the next chapter. Please and Thank you. With ...

Oh my gosh, you have and I meant just have to have to have to let me know when you finish the first chapter. This was so good and although ...

Wow, just wow. If you could see me clapping I would be. This was so marvelously written and I honestly didn't find any mistakes here. Although I really want to ...

Ah as soon as I started reading I knew you switched point of views, very good. That's somethings not accomplish with some works. Yet hopefully you described the pod more, ...

After already reading Chapter 1, I really wish I had read this first. Just the description of the queen and town and especially the children and guards. Just by those ...

"I didn’t to wait for her to respond." You don't really need the first (to) "However, I had to be angry with somebody, or anything for that matter." You also ...

I haven't read the first chapter yet, but after reading this, I can't wait for the third chapter. Honestly I didn't really see any mistakes is this chapter. It is ...

“It’s alright for you; you shaggy mute!” he cursed affectionately “you’ve got four strong legs!” '; you shaggy mute," he cursed affectionately, "you've got' I feel you don't need two ...