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I like it...I think. I'm not exactly sure, but I don't -dis- like it exactly... Punctuation, one teeny tiny little thing that -really- annoys me is when people can't tell ...

Interesting... First off, punctuation. Comma's are all well and good, but do remember the wonder's of a full stop! Alternate if there is a pause at the end of each ...

I like it! I like it alot considering that I -loathe- ignorance. And, sadly enough, it's true in today's society. We're forced to go to school, to learn and the ...

I really, really -really- like this part Or maybe yes, but they know naught As now the tower starts to rot. It’s too late now, for though they heard Man ...

Not too bad hehe, I'm not entirely sure -what- a garter snake -is- so...Yeah. I'm aussie, we have the venomous kinds :P Buuuut, good imagery. Yeah, there's not much I ...

I like it...it's taken me three sittings to read it, curse the bell! But I like it, it's...unusual to say the least. Oh, punctuate please? There are some random places ...

Interesting... Well I suppose that's one way to look at repeated suicide attempts. Punctuation would help a touch with this poem by the way, the way you've written it makes ...

To break the phase of adoration, I have to admit that I didn't like it, actually. No offence to you of course, it's just...well, a bit pointless seeming to me ...

Nice. An interesting take on Little Red Riding Hood to say the least. I like it, it's dark and all that.... And you're never told who the axeman was. I ...

I liked the first stanza...and the second....but after that you sort of lost the point. Well, you more lost the poetry and threw in a rhyme just for the hell ...

I liked it, hehe, it reminds me of a childrens movie...but I'm not too sure if that's where you go the inspiration from so.... Yeah....punctuation would help a fair bit. ...

I agree with Darg, you've given us basically the start, middle and plot of the tale...we know what's happened, what's happening and what's going to happen. Yawn. Describe the dragon ...

Um....wow. What else can I say considering that I have no idea what you or anyone else means by the repeated mentions of a Duel...don't mind me. I like it! ...

wasn't that riveting, to say the least. Mind you, trying to keep a friend from suiciding doesn't help in giving ones full attention to the story at hand... But, it ...

Interesting....But check through the paragraphs again hon, you missed a formatting and you've got three words to one line before you start another. Otherwise, intruiging, albeit it took a little ...