Chevy

Hey thanks Niteowl.. Side note: Wow! I didn't know you were 16! when did this happen? I didn't mean to seperate the first verse like that. I guess I accidentally ...

Nate: Thank you so much for the critiquing, I'm really influenced to edit it now. And the thing about the football players...well, I guess I should take it out because, ...

Thanks, Fontroy...you're right, I should try to get it in a newspaper. But I seriously have to work on it..I didn't realize how many errors such as run-on sentences and ...

(continued) So just think about it before you make your kid get off Myspace as soon as you see or hear of a problem. Think about what your father did ...

Like David said (GOSH...there are so many new people here), the "mean" was a bit redundant. I would suggest changing it to just: "And end up saying something that I ...

Yeah, it's hard after I've been writing songs for so long to write poetry because the rhyming scheme (when you're trying to rhyme, of course) is really hard and you ...

Makes me even colder.

Mmm I don't really get how it was about Classic Rock...but I still like it. And I'm a classic rock junkie too!

I kind of liked this, but the imagery was a bit strange and made the poem kind of cloudy. However, I got the concept...very important thing and the title reminded ...

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Thanks guys...I thought no one was going to read this.

Oh wow, Brad. Please tell me you're exaggerating :|.

I read it all. Brett you're an awesome guy. IM me. I'm bored.

Lol that was really good! I wish I had had the creativity to make that.

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