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Wow, that was chilling. Note to self never buy incense. A few grammar errors but it's a great novel! Here I think you meant the bells. the sounds of bells ...

Well that was dark. It was good though. I'm a little confused by this. What happens if someone doesn't show up to the ceremony? Why does the monster take people ...

Oh wow, beautifully written poem. The deepest level, my heart did sank I think sink would make more sense here so maybe change that? One wise, wise man once taught ...

Very emotional read, I think you captured the emotion of the main character well. There are a few grammar and spelling mistakes, which I'll point out here, so you can ...

This poem was very short so it's hard to write a review but I'll try. I like your usage of rhyme throughout the poem. I wouldn't put a poem by ...

Oh wow. That was very well written, a very beautiful poem. It was extremely emotional and romantic. I love your usage of analogies it's very clever and interesting. There's a ...

Great addition to the first part!!! I like how you added the perspective of Rusty this time instead of Mars and Minnie. That was very nice!!! Very cool cliffhanger. She ...

I love your metaphor, very smart. Not sure what the helicopter represents but that's OK. I'm not sure if you did this on purpose but all the i's are lower ...

Heya!!! Great book!!! Not sure where it's going though. I assume this is part 1 because nothing related to murder has happened yet. I wish you had gone a little ...

Oh wow. That was...emotional. Very well written...and relatable. I like how the speaker or the writer seems to be in conflict with themselves. And at the end they realize that ...

I saw this sitting around in the Green Room with no reviews and remembered reading part 1, so here I am to review part 2. First of all I love ...

I really liked this story, it had a lot of suspense and kept me engaged. I have a few suggestions here. Here I think you meant bottle? People don't usually ...

Oh wow, what a nice poem. It was very emotional (you could also take it in other ways besides online friends but anyways.) It was very well written and I ...

Wow! Good work. I like the use of rhyme throughout this poem, when I was reading this it felt like I was reading lyrics to a rap song so I ...

I have never felt this emotional about Minecraft I- Props to you. This almost made me tear up, wow, just wow, I don't know what to say. OK um...critique...see how ...