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Re: The Four - Chapter Three
Thanks for the review! You see, the shoe was the one mentioned earlier in this chapter when Milo is dumping out the stuff in his bag, worried that there was ...
Jun 30 -
Re: The Four - Chapter One
Thanks for the review! I really appreciate it. Yeah, I see what you mean by the out of the door; I'm definitely not a grammar expert either, so I'll have ...
Jun 25 -
Re: First part
This is a pretty nice opening! It is very descriptive and the reader is whisked away into the story. The suspense building is quite intriguing, making me want to read ...
May 27 - Re: First part May 27
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Re: 7 Minutes Left -- 7:00|Part 4
This story is pretty good; I enjoyed reading it. The emotional aspect was consistent and delivered nicely. Here are a few suggestions: -I am confused about who 'I' is. Is ...
Apr 19 -
Re: The Sky Watcher: Midnight (part one)
No problem! Let me know if you wrote any more of this book; I'd be interested in reading it.
Apr 19