ChernobyllyInclined

The bad thing about writing a story and telling people that it's about your life is that when they review it and tell you it isn't that good, it might ...

This was slightly disconcerting. CHARACTERS: I'm going to guess that you're writing about yourself by the way you talk like the reader already knows the characters pretty well. But I ...

Well, I admire your candor. Let's try that again, shall we? Wow. I am laughing surprisingly hard at how well that fits in with the story. CHARACTERS: I was definitely ...

Prok needs God help. His mind has admitted itself. I have those ideas but I don't make them into stories. I would feel like I was being useless and shallow. ...

I don't have time for a review, but I wanted to let you know I think your humor was clever and--perhaps--a little misunderstood. I thought the idea and the story ...

This was...interesting. I must say it is not only a cliche. CHARACTERS: I was actually impressed with the differentiation of the characters because, often, in a story like this, the ...

I will admit, I am annoyed. Do we not have enough stories that focus on dark, ugly, blackness full of filth? Can we not imagine something better than what we ...

The idea is good and I think you have handle on it, but it needs more imagery. Instead of just saying 'you cursed me' or 'you beat me', describe it. ...

Hey! I saw your shout on my blog. Unfortunately, I agree with you. I am incredibly awesome...haha Anyway, I liked this. The writing was good and it flowed rather well...onto ...

Oh my god. That was frightening. The writing was fairly good but the talent almost seemed wasted on something so hopelessly dark. Although there is, technically, nothing wrong with this ...

Well, I liked it. I must say that you have done a better job of differentiating bad guys in this one. I see neither a Rick nor a Kayo anywhere ...

Hmmmm...This was okay. I thought the second chapter was better than the first. Characters: You need to focus on Alicia more. Her character seems a little flat. All we know ...

I do like it, if were to venture at honesty, but I agree with the above reviewer. He doesn't exactly sound like who he is describing himself to be. I ...

I liked the main idea and that dream was most CERTAINLY interesting. Want to know more about that... You need to put the dream in italics, it's extremely confusing if ...

This was not very good. It was all telling and no showing and you tend to repeat yourself alot. All of the concepts were cliche and nothing about it catches ...