ChernobyllyInclined

Highschool is so boring. Unless you're going to blow up the school in the middle and send everyone to the unknown Virtuoso region of San Derinina. I commend you for ...

In general, this strikes me as your best work. But the others are right, it fizzles out. A "short" story doesn't mean a three paragraph story. Short stories are often ...

Yes! I have very serious problems with the girls who think they can demand everything from their boyfriends--including his agreement to everything they say--and then justify it by saying, "Well, ...

You are right that there is a valid and striking difference between modern art and renaissance/gothic art. But unless you give us your own objective definition of art and argue ...

This was actually pretty good. To be completely honest, I'm not interested by stories that involve highschools. They're overused and boring and they don't have that many different directions they ...

Dammit, Prok. Yes, I like it. And you are always such a surprising boy. But I feel like there's something missing. The ideas are compelling, slightly [brilliant] and mostly fantastic. ...

You definitely keep the suspense and I like Galyda's perspective in regards to all your neighborhood drama. It caused some amount intrigue where before there was only monotony. Honestly, there ...

...--Stayed, I did. For the whole thing. Even when things got nasty, I was destined to stay. Dire, dour, sour, hours of genius. The letter 'd' keeps coming to me. ...

Unfortunately, I don't have time for a long review. But I don't often find stories on here with some of the oddities that this one expressed. The girl was interesting ...

Personally, I am not partial to vampire stories. But I will be fair and give you my best review. CHARACTERS: The characters really have almost nothing that sets them apart ...

Thai! I am detrimentally disappointed that this has been on here for over a day and I am the first reviewer. You know how I told you that people only ...

I agree with Gilmore that this is well-done, in a way. You have a way with language and I think you did quite a nice job in every technical sense. ...

Very good, Sela. Mostly because it was posted on Frodo's birthday--good luck and all that. No, not really. Well written, really. Everything fit together nicely and previous reviewer caught the ...

Indeed, this is probably your best. Like I said, people don't like reviewing stuff they can't easily criticize. I was impressed at how even the pace was and how you ...

I am officially affronted. There should not be someone who considers himself/herself a writer who does not at least understand Dickens. Great Expectations was slower than some of his other ...