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Welcome to YWS and thank you for the review!

Thanks Alex! I will take all of your suggestions into account. :)

Love this. Absolutely love it. I really enjoy poems that have alternate meanings and stories behind them because it makes it more interesting. There's nothing to critique at all. This ...

Ohh, I get it now. Thanks for the clarification! And sure, you can use my example if you want. :)

Me too. ;)

Gotcha! Good luck!

Thank you* ;)

Thanks you!! :))

Hello Zen. Wow, this was really good. There's really nothing about it to change. I'll be looking forward to the rest! :)

Thanks!

Alright! :)

Thanks for the review. :)

Thanks iggy!

It sure does! Keep writing! :)

Wow, this is amazing. Nothing at all to critique- are you sure you haven't been writing that much? :)