Cheetah

Hey there youngandclueless! Let's get started: Well once again dragonfpheonix has stolen my ability to correct any punctuation or grammar mistakes whatsoever, and the one thing I would change rbt00 ...

Hey tgirly, here's Cheetah, and she's going to review again! This was really good! Best piece of work you've done that I know of! Italics are our friends, and you ...

Hi there EmilieHaugaard! Cheetah here, ready to review your piece. First off, this was really good! I like your style, the way the last two lines are always split, it ...

Hello NinaRowan, Cheetah here, ready to review your piece! Well, this was okay, but it could have been a lot better. This story has potential and I look forward to ...

Hello again Auxiira! This cheetah's ready to review! I'm glad you shared this with this community because a lot of us know what it's like to hear people tell us ...

Hello there, Cheetah here ready to review your piece! This made me laugh when I read it. Seriously, this is so awesome! You're brave, reaching out to the unfamiliar territory ...

Hello there, Nargles. Cheetah here for a Review Day review! Dragonfpheonix snagged up all the technical stuff, so here goes: This was a good poem! I really like the natural ...

Hi there FCS. Cheetah here ready to review. HomeschooledTeen caught all of the grammar and spelling mistakes, so here goes: Wow. This was amazing. I wasn't even 1 year old ...

Hello there fellow Rouge! Cheetah here for your review! This is a pretty awesome concept! I can imagine how Time would think a clock is some cheap rip-off of his ...

Hey there smanske! Looks like dragonfpheonix snagged all the grammatical errors and gave you a pretty sweet review, but another one never hurts. You did a really good job here! ...

Hello again! I understand your first chapter a bit better now, so I decided to read the second! This one was really good! It's important to do a good job ...

Hello PumpkinCat! Cheetah here, ready to review your piece. This was actually a really good poem. When I saw the title "People" I thought it would be about the general ...

Hello! Cheetah here, ready to review your piece! This was pretty good, you had a good concept and it was an OK beginning, but I think it could use just ...

Hello there Storm! Cheetah here, ready to review your piece! This was really good! It's definitely a short story, but it's so poetic- it's beautiful. I love the way you ...

Hello yubbies, Cheetah here for your review! This is great! I think a lot of users here can definitely relate to that feeling of dread, whether it's a hairball or ...