Chasmira1060

Extremely powerful. Wonderful imagery, especially towards the very end. This scrolled before me like a movie, I could picture it all in my head, much as with my novel Bloodmaiden, ...

Brilliant and captivating! i was hooked from the start by your description of the forest, comparing the autumn leaves to fire; I also felt the fire representative of the dying ...

This is truly brilliant, some of the best writing I have read on this and similar writer's websites! Your writing is simple yet beautiful, with lovely imagery that made it ...

Brilliant! Absolutely brilliant; after reading the first metaphor, I intended to quote and commend how well it works; but reading the whole poem, there are too many excellent metaphors to ...

I really enjoyed reading this story; I always love tales that put a new twist on how something came to be. The title I thought was very clever, and I ...

Simple but lovely--and definitely speaks to a lot of us who have experienced unrequited love! I used to experience some of these symptoms over a guy I liked for seven ...

Brilliant! The writing is very good, and I feel as though you use a very literary style. I actually liked the lack of quotation marks; I thought perhaps you used ...

Truly intriguing! The table's bubbling is quirky--in a good way, I like unique things! I hope we later explore the friends' connections more, I found that interesting as well. I ...

Very intriguing start. At first, when her feet are washed in blood, I thought she had killed someone herself. But reading on, it becomes so much more interesting than that! ...

I find this piece quite brilliant. The language is very beautiful; I love how all the metaphors parallel her real life. At first, I felt like everything she was describing ...

"A girl with sand-white skin strolled in the common. Tendrils of flaming auburn curls spilled from beneath a kerchief that was tied tightly about her head. She had fine, intelligent ...

Wow, this is actually really brilliant! I love the first line: "The world wrinkled, sending waves of light across the air like ripples in water." The description here is beautiful ...