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Charm

Even if I'm slow I will walk with my own feet, because I know this path is mine to take, I will never lose my dream.

  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: four letter word: $#!?

    thought this was going to be the f-word lol

    Nov 8, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: fire, water, air, and earth in two sections {a collection}

    iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii ffffffrrrrrrrrrrriiiiiiiiccccccckkkkkkeeeeeeennnnnnnnn llllloovvvvveeeeeeee tttttthhhhhhhhiiiiiiiiiisssssssss aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

    Nov 8, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: more than just fire

    haha thank you :)

    Nov 8, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: the art of letting go - pt.1 (spoken word)

    love love love this aaahhhh

    Nov 4, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: From Mrs Midas

    the last two lines are spectacular

    Nov 4, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: beige

    this is so perfect and i just like i'm kind of dying rn because this is everything i've been trying to put down on paper

    Nov 3, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: falling at wonderful heights

    thanks

    Nov 3, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: falling at wonderful heights

    No problem. I wasn't trying to be mean. I was trying to help.

    Nov 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: falling at wonderful heights

    Thanks Martin

    Nov 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: falling at wonderful heights

    It's not about being picky. I just recommend that if you review poetry be aware that punctuation and grammar isn't important for poetry.

    Nov 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: falling at wonderful heights

    Thanks for the review. This poem is actually probably the happiest poem I've ever written xD (that's about my life). I'm glad you enjoyed it, though you interpreted it differently ...

    Nov 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: falling at wonderful heights

    Thanks for this review. I'm glad you liked my poem though I don't agree with any of your criticism. Poetry doesn't have to have punctuation and things like that. Poetry ...

    Nov 1, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: falling at wonderful heights

    Thank you

    Nov 1, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: ash mouth

    i liked this after reading the first stanza because

    Oct 31, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, Narrative Re: cornflower blue

    why have i just found you???? *follows*

    Oct 31, 2016


That's how we should measure our lives. Not in distance traveled, or time passed, or worlds conquered, but in moments... and the rush of joy—of grace—that exists within them.
— Megatron (Lost Light, by Roberts, Lawrence, Lafuente)