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Charm

Even if I'm slow I will walk with my own feet, because I know this path is mine to take, I will never lose my dream.

  • Article / Essay » Romantic, Narrative Re: What I'm looking for in a girl

    the strongest cities are those without walls wow this is like so me like wow it describes me so well wow

    Jun 18, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Health Re: she calls me selfish

    ah okay!

    Jun 18, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: les luttes d'un poète

    edit* not review oops

    Jun 17, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Health Re: she calls me selfish

    thanks for your review! i'll edit this asap also: Every style guide I checked, except the AP Stylebook, stated there should be no spaces between an em-dash and the adjacent ...

    Jun 17, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: les luttes d'un poète

    thank you so much for your review! i'll edit this poem asap and i always struggle with expanding on imagery because i don't really know what to say or want ...

    Jun 17, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: les luttes d'un poète

    thanks

    Jun 17, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: les luttes d'un poète

    thank you!!!

    Jun 17, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: stagnant summer

    this is so great omg! i really love the lines: but, darling, i long to say, i am a quagmire. this is seriously so good. i missed reading your poetry

    Jun 16, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: forgiveness

    ayyyy marmalade ;)

    Jun 16, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: macrocosm

    i really love this poem even more than i love your other peoms. it's really amazing.

    Jun 16, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Health Re: she calls me selfish

    aweeee thanks! i adore your poetry too

    Jun 16, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Health Re: she calls me selfish

    Thank so so so much for the review. I can see how the second stanza is confusing and I'll definitely try to work on that. This poem was written narrator ...

    Jun 16, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Health Re: she calls me selfish

    thanks

    Jun 16, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Health Re: she calls me selfish

    thank you!

    Jun 15, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Health Re: she calls me selfish

    the poem is about a friend but it can be interpreted as a lover. my poetry is open to whatever the reader things it means. the meaning of the poem ...

    Jun 15, 2017


Look, a good poem is a poem that exists. Any poem you write is better than the poem you don't.
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