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This was great! I am fascinated by unsolved murder cases and I have heard of this one before. It was in 1912 in Villisca, Iowa. Everyone in the house was ...

Ohmylord I loved this so much. I absolutely LOVE the Plain White T's and this song. It was amazing that you could write this story so true to the lyrics ...

I absolutely love this story! You want to know why I love it? It's because it is absolutely, 100% unique. I have never ever heard a story like this before ...

Hey! Back again! Now that I have had my jolt of caffine, I feel much more. . . . .relaxed, rather than on edge like before. :) I'm pretty sure ...

Hey! I really liked this a lot. It has definite potential and I am so excited to read the rest! There were some spelling mistakes, "apereaer=appear" and "smae=same" That was ...

OMIGOD!! I loved it! I liked how the whole heart break thing was setup and how he thought he was protecting her by being mean to her. I thought it ...

Hey! Okay. This chapter was very short in my opinion of chapters I've read. (other than the Maximum Ride series). But anyway, I think that you should have gone more. ...

Wolf Heart : Hidden Prologue Shouts and screams echoed throughout the forest, coming from the clearing on it's edge. I was dragged away from the battle, for all I knew, ...

Hey! I liked this a lot and I've looked at the novel's page. I have to ask because it confuses me a lot, but is Alantic Prep the same thing ...

Hey, Addawen! I agree with Tenyo. The S.I.N.G. doesn't work if you are against a wall or in this case a counter. You have to have room to do it ...

Hey Okay so I'm not going to tell you what needs fixing because that would just be repetative. So I like the story a lot, granted I just started it ...

Hey! Your chapter was EVERYWHERE in this chapter. It was bouncing off the walls and everything. Not to sound harsh or anything but it wasn't as good as the others. ...

Hey! I was wondering what was up with Kevin and Victoria? Are they going to end up with eachother because if they are you should have seriously added more touchy-feely ...

Hey Pink! Okay I liked this chapter a lot, but it kinda contrdicts the character of Nick in my eyes. In the previous chapters, you had said that he had ...

I liked i. I don't think that you should outline every part of the fight, but just enough to tell what's happenning. I have this pet peeve about capitilization, and ...