Charlotte2

I know this is probably not as good as some of my other poems (what with the rhythm and everything) but I needed to say it.

I had the same problem. Try putting a ~ in between stanzas, because that works for me. Hope this helped!

No, don't worry, it's fine!

Hi, thanks for the review. I get what you mean about the rhyme scheme, and I think your critiques are very helpful. Just to let you know, about the whole ...

I still thank you for the review, though. It is always good to have different opinions on it, so I do still appreciate it.

The best way to do criticism is to talk about things that were good, and things that could be improved. It's rude to say something is completely awful. Remember that.

Just saying - I don't mind your critiques, but the way you worded 'But the flow was not great' wasn't a kind way to do it. If you're ever going ...

Hello! Thanks for the review. Just quickly wanted to mention that 'faerie' is correct, but it's a medieval spelling and isn't really used anymore. I just like the effect it ...

Hello. I just want to respond to this review, because while I found the critiques useful, I also felt like it was kind of picking at me personally. I don't ...

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Thanks for the review! I think it's a bit weird myself sometimes, but apples are my favourite fruit so I thought I had to write something about them. Thanks again!

So, there are meant to be stanzas, but for some reason, it's not letting me do them. The first stanza is "Hidden" to "weave" Second: "Two" to "see" Third: "A ...

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I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you :-)