Charizard821

Well, that was my mistake. Hydrophobia. Gotta get around to fixing that.

I'll definitely be looking to expand my verb usage in the future. I'm constantly checking them now to be sure I have contrast. As for poetic device, that's a brilliant ...

Yes, I can assure you, the he said, she said problem was fixed. It was pointed out by Hunter and I've since been looking out for it. However, it may ...

Glad you liked it. And (prepare for shock) I think this was the only chapter I didn't proofread.

Glad you're still liking it!

Haha! Great to see you again Dark. Actually, I have a proposition for you. I'll be posting something on your wall, so be sure to check it out.

Great!

TOOTHLESS!!!!!!!!!! But seriously, thanks for the review! And fear not, you may not have to wait until next year at all! It's already halfway done, and I'm planning on working ...

Don't worry. Will isn't going to be any classic jerk. You'll see what I mean soon.

Oh my gosh! I take back what I said! I had a feeling there was a plot twist somewhere in here, but I didn't understand it until I read the ...

Anytime. As an added gift, I have also followed you.

Thanks. Glad you liked it so much. Merry Christmas.

Well, my intention was to be that guy that actually said don't use it, but I respect your opinion.

Great thoughts on the matter. I disagree but you presented your thoughts in a great way, so nice work!

Thanks for the review. I personally disagree but it is your opinion not mine.