Charizard821

Hi. Sorry for the shortness of this reply, but my computer deleted my really long one. (Why computer, why?!) Anyways, thanks for the review. As you know, your opinion is ...

As do many Dark, as do many. But seriously, thanks for your reviews! I read them both but only commented on this one. I've been busy, so publishing has been ...

Oh, and my author's notes at the end are probably going to stay there just to recap what happened during the chapter. (I know it's not very official to use ...

First of all, I commend you for eight thousand characters! Looks like you really put a lot of time and effort into this review. However, there are a few things ...

Alright. Thank you for that.

Risky indeed! But I will stick with the story. Also, being a Pokemon fan, you should check out my story, "The Tale of a Charmander." I'd love to hear your ...

You're welcome.

Yes, that's what he's saying. (I believe.) He says if you pick a side and back it up, it will help provide a bigger impact and help guide readers along ...

Hi Lumi. Personally I disagree with this. I like to consider myself a theorist and part of making or sharing a theory is sometimes being undecided. A large portion of ...

Hi! Thanks for the compliment! That was really nice. I hope you stick around for the rest of the story because it's going to get real good real fast.

Thank you for the criticism and support. Both mean a lot to me. I will try and improve in the chapters to come. Hope you stick with it!

Thanks! Good to know it was liked! Chapter 2 will be out soon.

Wow, a lot of criticism there. Thanks for the advice. I'll definitely take that into consideration. I hope you continue to follow the story. And in answer to your question, ...

Haha thank you very much! Don't worry. This is going to be a very detailed and twisting story, and it'll come soon in the next few chapters. Right now, I ...

Wow you're the best! Thanks so much!