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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Thunder and Ice Chapter 3 ~ Songa

    This seems pretty cool! Right off the bat I like the playful teacher, annoyed student thing. Nice twist. Since I haven't read the other chapters, from the beginning of this ...

    Sep 13, 2016
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: For All Intents and Purposes - pt. 2

    Oh man. I can't even begin to describe how good this book- I mean CHAPTER is. It feels like I should just turn the page and keep reading. Nevertheless, I ...

    May 11, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Dramatic Re: 700 words from page 153 of ma book

    WELL CRAP THEN. *Claps wildly* I loved it! The numbers in between the kills them not only helped me keep track of the dead, but it was a super nice ...

    Apr 27, 2016
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: The Farm

    AH! I love it! I was scared that this was going to be another boring romance story, but boy was I wrong! I love the setup of this family and ...

    Apr 24, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Invincible Chapter One

    Ah more plot! The guy is barely in the room for 5 seconds before he starts making bombs. :D The description of the room is great, I can totally picture ...

    Apr 21, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Invincible Prologue

    Even though it was short, I like it. I can't really tell what's going on but I guess it will be explained as the story goes on. I couple of ...

    Apr 21, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Other, General Re: The Girl in a Boy Band

    I like the idea! It just seems...rushed? I mean, the odds of a guy in a limo hearing her sing in her deep voice and inviting her to be a ...

    Apr 21, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Royal Drinks and Marks

    It's so sad. I don't get the Mr. Cruz ending though. This friendship story is so simple, but the way you worded it gives it so much more depth. I ...

    Apr 21, 2016
  • Poetry » Culture, Realistic Re: The View From the Past

    Amazing! I love every bit of description in this story. The way you describe the characters and the scenes makes it so easy to envision. The last paragraph is simply ...

    Apr 20, 2016


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