Chantatertot

I really like what you've got here so far. Like the others said, the transition from the library to outside is abrupt; I found myself thinking "why did she jump ...

I really, really, really love the "But we never did grow old. Or pretty, or smart. The only way we ever grew, was further apart." That really stuck with me. ...

Hi, gottahaveFaith. I want to start off by saying that this is a really inspiring essay. The prompt isn't an easy one and it's never easy to say what you ...

Hi, Sarahjo! I like where the story is headed so far. I'm a sucker for a supernatural romance which is what I'm guessing this will shape up to be. The ...

Hi, MarySue! I just want to say, your word choice is great. I love the way you describe Grayson's surroundings while leaving enough to the imagination to be interesting. I'm ...