ChangeTheWorld

Hey hey! here I am, because I need a break from novel chapters honestly XP can you say exhausting! Hopefully it will be nice Sometimes its not. This feels very ...

Hey! Me again. He was also the youngest and although he didn’t have the same education he was the brightest. So this is just an example. There should be a ...

Hey hey! It is time to tackle this project is it not? so far there hasn't been any recoveries from this infection which has a current 60 people in critical ...

Hola! I might as well review this too right? ohmygosh my eyes! Girl look at that formatting! You can fix that, I know you can. So I'm going to ignore ...

Hey girl! Still review day, time for reviewing! What do you say to a child who has looked up to you with confidence and pride in their eyes So generally ...

I'm thinking one more review before I call it a night. But that might just be me lying to myself. :) The same eyes once bursting with light have sunken ...

Hey! Change back again as I said I would be :) So I'm pretty sure the two beauties below got the majority of the punctuation stuff. I was wondering about ...

Lastly Chapter Five! Make sure to post on my wall when the next chapter is out okay? I would also like some clarification on the "Scafy Corner" I'm not really ...

Sorry I didn't mean to post that last thing. It was an accident. or make my surroundings laugh. Again with the "surroundings" thing when referring to people. I just think ...

Heeeeyyy :) Finally to the green room ones! that gained their lives thanks to I don't really get what you mean by gained... "Yes I am!", she answered. With the ...

BACK! Hope you love me (don't hate me!) but I soon decided to keep that for myself Small thing, but I think this should be "to myself." And then a ...

Heeeeyyyy! Supppp? it would always slow me down. I just think this might sound better as: "it always makes me slow." An artist always give a name to its work ...

If I'm going to review all the chapters I have to start with one! Happy review day :) they wanted to match their beings with their respective characteristics and features, ...

Hello there, Review time :) So the first thing I noticed is that you have no paragraphs. The first like three of four sentences in the beginning, when everything is ...

Hey! Change here for a reviewwwww! I agree with Dragon about the opening stanza being rough. I get the point of it but it's all stated a bit simplistically and ...