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Re: Lost Magic. Chapter 10
Hi! Cesar her for a review. I love how you write this novel in a diary form. I wish I write like you do, unfortunately, I have a different writing ...
May 31, 2014 -
Re: How To Train Your Dragon Prologue And Chapter 1- An Addition To The Story *Added flashback for Willowpaw1*
Hey, CesareBorgia, here for a review! I liked this chapter, but there are many nitpicks I have. I now that you're a new writer and all, so this is new ...
May 30, 2014 -
Re: Dawn of the Daughter of God- Part Two (REWRITE)
Hello, CesareBorgia here for a review, as requested. I really like this novel. Especially since it's Historical Fiction, which isn't my strength, but what the hell. Joan’s face saddened, “my ...
May 29, 2014 -
Re: It's Just Life.
Hello, CesareBorgia, here for a review! I've never read any of your poetry before. Until now, I thought you a prose person. This poem was really good. It's just wow ...
May 29, 2014 -
Re: Eyes Wide Shut 4.2
Hi CeasreBorgia here for a review. I loved this chapter because it, like every other chapter, has something happening. The story is moving slowly, and pacefully, if that's a word. ...
May 29, 2014 -
Re: Innocence
Hey, CesareBorgia here for a review. This is for the Poetry Exchange. I haven't read any of your works before, and i realize that that was a big mistake. This ...
May 29, 2014 -
Re: Sonnet
Hey, CesareBorgia, here for a review. This is for the poetry exchange. I've never written or read a sonnet before, so this is very unique. In fact, I don't even ...
May 29, 2014 -
Re: If You Want to See Sappy...
Hello, CesareBorgia, here to review, Hi Audy, this is for the Poetry exchange. I really like this poem. You're poems are always so creative and awesome, and I'm honored to ...
May 26, 2014 -
Re: Blind - Chapter 16
Hello, CesareBorggia here for a review, Happy Review Day! I love how you try as best as you can to be descriptive when the MC is blind. It's cool. He ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Happiness...
Hello, CesareBorgia here for a review. Happy Review Day! Wow, I've never seen an acrostic poem on YWS. I must savor this moment*takes deep breaths* I like this poem because ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: To the boy who slept in my bed last night.
Hello CesareBorgia here for a review. Happy Review Day! I liked this poem. It's really good and emotional. You've written so much poetry, and every loves your works. You're always ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Koala's Climb
Hello, CesareBorgia, here for a review. Seeing as your a new poet, this is really good. I also have to say that as a poet, all you have to do ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: I never liked my hands
Hello CesareBorgia here for a review, You're like the best poet ever. How long have you been writing? This was really good. There are several qualms though. I told you ...
May 24, 2014 -
Re: Eyes Wide Shut 4.1
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May 22, 2014
Hi! Cesare here to review again, I liked this chapter, mainly because it's the aftermath of the other chapter, and because I've literally have been waiting for this chapter. :D ... -
Re: Eyes Wide Shut 4.1
Hi! Cesare here to review again, I liked this chapter, mainly because it's the aftermath of the other chapter, and because I've literally have been waiting for this chapter. :D ...
May 22, 2014
