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CesareBorgia

CesareBorgia

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Lost Magic. Chapter 10

    Hi! Cesar her for a review. I love how you write this novel in a diary form. I wish I write like you do, unfortunately, I have a different writing ...

    May 31, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: How To Train Your Dragon Prologue And Chapter 1- An Addition To The Story *Added flashback for Willowpaw1*

    Hey, CesareBorgia, here for a review! I liked this chapter, but there are many nitpicks I have. I now that you're a new writer and all, so this is new ...

    May 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Historical Fiction Re: Dawn of the Daughter of God- Part Two (REWRITE)

    Hello, CesareBorgia here for a review, as requested. I really like this novel. Especially since it's Historical Fiction, which isn't my strength, but what the hell. Joan’s face saddened, “my ...

    May 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, Lyrical Re: It's Just Life.

    Hello, CesareBorgia, here for a review! I've never read any of your poetry before. Until now, I thought you a prose person. This poem was really good. It's just wow ...

    May 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: Eyes Wide Shut 4.2

    Hi CeasreBorgia here for a review. I loved this chapter because it, like every other chapter, has something happening. The story is moving slowly, and pacefully, if that's a word. ...

    May 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Literature, Literature Re: Innocence

    Hey, CesareBorgia here for a review. This is for the Poetry Exchange. I haven't read any of your works before, and i realize that that was a big mistake. This ...

    May 29, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Sonnet

    Hey, CesareBorgia, here for a review. This is for the poetry exchange. I've never written or read a sonnet before, so this is very unique. In fact, I don't even ...

    May 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: If You Want to See Sappy...

    Hello, CesareBorgia, here to review, Hi Audy, this is for the Poetry exchange. I really like this poem. You're poems are always so creative and awesome, and I'm honored to ...

    May 26, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Realistic Re: Blind - Chapter 16

    Hello, CesareBorggia here for a review, Happy Review Day! I love how you try as best as you can to be descriptive when the MC is blind. It's cool. He ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Happiness...

    Hello, CesareBorgia here for a review. Happy Review Day! Wow, I've never seen an acrostic poem on YWS. I must savor this moment*takes deep breaths* I like this poem because ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: To the boy who slept in my bed last night.

    Hello CesareBorgia here for a review. Happy Review Day! I liked this poem. It's really good and emotional. You've written so much poetry, and every loves your works. You're always ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Koala's Climb

    Hello, CesareBorgia, here for a review. Seeing as your a new poet, this is really good. I also have to say that as a poet, all you have to do ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: I never liked my hands

    Hello CesareBorgia here for a review, You're like the best poet ever. How long have you been writing? This was really good. There are several qualms though. I told you ...

    May 24, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: Eyes Wide Shut 4.1

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    Hi! Cesare here to review again, I liked this chapter, mainly because it's the aftermath of the other chapter, and because I've literally have been waiting for this chapter. :D ...

    May 22, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: Eyes Wide Shut 4.1

    Hi! Cesare here to review again, I liked this chapter, mainly because it's the aftermath of the other chapter, and because I've literally have been waiting for this chapter. :D ...

    May 22, 2014


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