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Re: Dreamer - Chapter 1
Hello CesareBorgia, here for a review I'm a start off by saying that this was excellent piece of literary work. It was also short sweet and to the point. I'm ...
Apr 21, 2015 -
Re: Worn shoes on the cobblestone path
Hello, CesareBorgia here for a review. I haven't been here in so long, this might be rusty. Over all, I thought that this was very well written. I really have ...
Apr 9, 2015 -
Re: Werething - Chapter 8
Hey, CesareBorgia, here for a review, (Duh -.-) I was looking over my reviews, and saw that I had liked the second chapter of this novel, so I decided to ...
Nov 22, 2014 -
Re: Redwing - Chapter 8.1
CesareBorgiam here for a review (Duh -.-) This story is a real page turner, I really loved it, I couldn't stop reeding it. Even though I had no clue what ...
Nov 22, 2014 -
Re: (The long awaited) Forbidden Shadows Chapter 15 Part 2!
Hello, CesareBorgia, here for a review, I kind of liked this chapter, but at the same time I didn't. I didn't liked it mainly because I really do not understand ...
Nov 20, 2014 -
Re: Ending
Hey, this is CesareBorgia here for a review This review may be short seeing as how this is a short piece. First thing I wanted to say was that I ...
Nov 19, 2014 -
Re: Silence is Silver, Chapter 34.
Hi, CesareBorgia, here for a review. I haven't read a single chapter of this novel, but it is really good. I was not writing this well at age 11. xD, ...
Nov 17, 2014 -
Re: Eyes Wide Shut 9.2
CesareBorgia This is the first review I've done in a long time, and I really need to publish the new Vampirial chapter. Sorry I have been MIA, and this will ...
Nov 17, 2014 -
Re: Werething - Chapter 2
Hey krazywriter, It's CessyB here for a review. This story is quite gripping. I do however have some suggestions to improve the story. His breath smelled of alcohol. I wouldn't ...
Sep 13, 2014 -
Re: Breathe The Poison
Hello, CessyB here for a review, I'm to lazy to say my full name, but whatever. I liked this very much, it was a change in what really happened, because ...
Jun 8, 2014 -
Re: Phoenix
Hello, CesareBorgia, here for a review, I really liked this poem, but there are some qualms. Because you are eleven though, it makes it better since you are so good. ...
Jun 4, 2014 -
Re: Lost Magic. Chapter 11
Hello, CesareBorgia, here for a review! This was a good chapter. Mainly because they found out something new. You're not good with descriptions, but for a new writer, you're doing ...
Jun 4, 2014 -
Re: Eyes Wide Shut 5.1
Hello, CesareBorgia, here for a review, I liked this chapter. It shows a new dilemna in the story. There aren't alot of nitpicks though, here they are. enough behind. “He ...
Jun 4, 2014 -
Re: Life of Stephanie Pritchard~Chapter 2: Birthday Party (Part 1)
Hello, CesareBorgia, here for a review, I liked this chapter, it seems like real life, and that's why I like it! The plot is awesome, the grammar is okay, here's ...
Jun 4, 2014 -
Re: Christmas Day and The End (12 Days Before Christmas) *Edited*
Hello, CesareBorgia, here for a review. How... how could you do this to me, I'm going to miss this novel. Well, I have to say Congrats on completing the novel! ...
Jun 1, 2014