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whoo! This was hilarious! Short but funny! I wanna find out what is gonna happen next! this is probably one of the best twilight parodies i've seen yet. As far ...

all i can say is wow you really made this a bit of an original story. Good job. Other than what the others have mentioned already i don't see any ...

lemme start off by saying good job on this it really makes you think "wow what if edward hadn't been brought up as a vegetarian vampire?" it was pretty cool. ...

I say keep going i wanna find out more about this character i was wondering how the whole Jacob/Renesmee thing was gonna work out. werewolf+halfvampire+halfhuman=one interesting baby. so really other ...

ok so this is a really good story. It really brings the readers a possibility of what could have happened when Edward left Bella. Very creative. the charm bracelet is ...

wow that was pretty interesting i'll admit! I am actually in love with the twilight saga but this was still pretty funny! really all i saw was one or two ...

wow i think you have an interesting story but the thing is i am lost i don't much about Ally. How old is she? hair color? eye color? what secret? ...

Zuko's face showed confusion when he was his opponent. ok this is the first error i spotted as one of the other veiwers said is this supposed to be "saw"? ...

the only thing i noticed in these sogn lyrics is that i see where the chorus starts but whee does it end? her is what i do i put a ...

wow that is all i can say about this story is wow but in a good way. this reminds me alot of R.L. Stein's books and stuff. really about the ...

i am a big fan of Pirates of the Caribbean and you did a good job as Captian Cassy said you took to long with the action and i saw ...

She looks down, pulling at his lapels, then met her dark eyes with her own blue ones. “Go on,” she prompts him. i believe you meant met his dark eyes ...

ok i agree with Fortuna you will make a wonderful writer. If that is what you choose to be in life I say go for it. I am just going ...

Very interesting. I don't see much of anything wrong with it right now other than i have no clue of who "she" is or "he" for that matter. If you ...

ok. first off i wanted to let you know that i am so excited to find someone who thinks it would be cool to see two Fowls going against each ...