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Ok so this sounds so much better than my twilight saga story only in a different way. Where mine was for the Cullens yours was agianst them. This is pretty ...

RED=Remove Purple= suggestion Blue= I like Sherwood , Oh , Sherwood is Robin Hood awake? For his daughter Rowan is waiting at the lake. A daughter of outlaws is uncommon ...

Ok wow! this si really interesting. you told the story(or at least the first part of it) giving us the information without making the reader bored. Good Job! So I ...

Ok so I like the idea of how Simba now has a grandson. However, I noticed a couple of thigns that the others have already pointed out. It was rather ...

LOl this is cute as can be but I agree with the others. As far as errors they have pointed them all out and well it would be just a ...

ok so given that I have actually never heard of this series this may or may not be an appropriate review for this particular piece but I want to review ...

ok so I have never heard of the series before but reading this fanfic made me want to check it out. I just happened to see this fanfic and i ...

Ok so all I can say about this particular piece is wow. This is very interesting. It kept my interest which is always a good thing. Me personally, I am ...

Oh wow! You have a gift! This brought tears to my eyes. This was sooo beautiful! please please please keep writing things like this! I can tell you really got ...

Wow I liked this alot. It is really good. I do have a question/suggestion though. When she is at the altar with Edward and she has tears welling up in ...

ok so I'm not very familiar with Harry potter but this actually made sense. There were maybe two or three errors I saw. Bill’s clawed hand was pointing at a ...

Well, overall this was an interesting story it has potential. I can't figure out what this is based on though. As far as errors, I didn't see any other than ...

ok overall brilliant! Very accurate. Great display of emotions. Just a couple of nitpicks here though. I: 1947 Rouge and frustration color her cheeks. She lowers her chin and pulls ...

ok first off I love how this is coming along. It's similiar to Twilight but more from Edward's point of view. However, there are one or two errors I noticed. ...

ok to begin with honestly I do not know much about this particular anime but I will try to give you a good review here. This overall was pretty good. ...