CelticaNoir

A rather well-done cliffhanger. But I wish you put a few more spaces between the lines, like so: “I be a bee, I see a bee, I ate a little ...

Well, I think Kaedee's pointed out any previous mistakes, so I digress. It was brilliant! I especially loved how mysterious you made it - the reason behind Kade's pursuit of ...

Leza here! ^^ Okay...this is good for a first time script. I liked the idea, and while Vast is right about the characters and all that, it wasn't bad either. ...

Hey, it's Leza again. ^^ Okay, for starters, the paragraphs aren't clumped together, so that's good. I also noticed that you kept your attention towards meticulous details. Well done. But ...

O_o Well, while everyone's said it for me all, I am going to review, so here it is. I will say this - your knack for detail is something I ...

Haha, I loved it. :P This one takes a different direction from other Twilight spoofs I've seen so far, so well done. Poor, poor Rob. :P Robyn.

Wow...and I mean it. :P I had to stiffle my laughter so my mum wouldn't wake up. :D Derek's absolutely right, the books don't compare - 'coz Twilight sucks. It ...

Hi Kyo, it's Leza. ^^ Well done, but I still found it a little heavy on the eyes. You could do with separating the single paragraphs into multiple, shorter paragraphs, ...

I'll give it a line-by-line review. ^^ The men all gathered round to see the show in the street. A single woman danced, streamers waved around, This is supposed to ...

Beautiful and poignant, really emotional. Grin summed it up for me, so I don't think I'll be much help here. Anyways, I liked how you described the excitement and thrill ...

Hi Durrie! ^^ I talked to you in chat before, didn't I? ^^ Anyways, let me see... The story is descriptive and beautifully so - I love how the scenes ...

I couldn't read the whole thing, so I'll just give you a lowdown on it - mainly, it was too long to read. Being an action/adventure type of story, the ...

Hm. Definitely filled with despair. I think it's the words of someone dying from smoking. No, wait - it's someone committing suicide because they lost their lover, at least I ...

Where do I start...it's really rather haunting. I'm not personally good with lyrics myself, so this is definitely an effort better than I ever could have done. On the other ...