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Re: Let Me Help You
This is a very good sort story. And, acsily short too! There is one grammar mistake I found though. And, now of course I can't find it.....sorry. So just edit ...
May 18, 2014 -
Re: prologue
This is going to be a sucky review but, here it goes. Alright. First off I find this a bit offensive. I mean you say once great nation like she ...
May 18, 2014 -
Re: Death Note (fanfic): Chapter 1
Alright. This is an amazing story, but not long enough...not in a mean way...like...I NEED TO READ MORE! Put up chapter two soon!!! AMAZING STORY!! I wonder what the notebook ...
Jan 31, 2014 -
Re: Death Note Unleashed: Chapter 1
All right, first off this is one amazing story. I am not the person to ask for spelling or editing since...well, you read my story. Lol. Any ways, get chapter ...
Jan 31, 2014 -
Re: The Good Life - Chapter One: Losing It
*Fallow* that is one amazing story, I can't wait until the next chapter!! I love everything about it! It tock a lot of foucas, since I have a teribal attachon ...
Jan 29, 2014 -
Re: Army of One.
Wow....just amazing. It shows the struggles that people face in life. I have known people that have trying to push everyone away, but, I didn't stay gone long because, I ...
Jan 29, 2014 -
Re: Masks.
Okay...thired review so this won't be amazing, sorry. Anyways, I love how this poem shows that you are your own enemy and, that you must face yourself. This shows how ...
Jan 29, 2014 -
Re: A rape story.
Alright, this is only my second review, so I am still getting a hang of it...sorry. I really like this, because, I didn't exspect the ending. I mean like awesome!! ...
Jan 29, 2014 -
Re: Something Called a Friend
Wow...that is really good. Alright, I am new here, so sorry thins review is going to kinda suck...anyways, I like how it shows how pepole are shy, but, should open ...
Jan 29, 2014