Cathe993

Hi, Cathe993 here! First, this is a pretty hard literary work to review. From what I understand, you are trying to show a teacher's frustration over his students' behavior, right? ...

Hi, Cathe993 here! First, I think your stories are hilarious. They do reflect some of the political points of view and situations today. For "Rapunzel", I think there's a typo--there ...

Hi, Cathe993 here! I like your descriptions of scenes--I can see them in my head! I can also feel the emotions the characters have. :) Check your grammar a bit. ...

Wow--I've actually finished reading this!! Now first, great plot, great story, great characters. I think you wrote this story a bit too fast, though--check your grammar and punctuation carefully! Read

It's a wonderful narrative with a nice theme and lesson. You might want to list out what the pros and cons you were thinking about before you made your decision, ...

The story is pretty good so far. The breaks are a little confusing, though. Maybe if you tried to introduce each part or add a few extra sentences to make ...

I think your story is great! The descriptions are wonderful and I can see the scenes in my head. In this sentence: Her coal-black scales melted into the shadows of ...