Catalyst

Thanks a lot! It's a little out of my usual area of writing, but I think it turned out fine.

Thanks for the review, it was super helpful!

When I first read this, I was a tad annoyed-- Then I remembered that this is the crappy old version of the piece. I was meaning to replace it with ...

Thanks for the review, it was super helpful! (Go Spoops!)

Thanks for the review! I kept it pretty vague, but the loose intention was that his promise was not to die on his own terms rather than let death claim ...

That it was. That it is. That I shall. Thanks for the review!

Quite a constructive comment you got there.

Thanks for the review! I'll be sure to keep you posted!

Oh, okay, thanks :D

Oh, and in regards to Kauthers thoughts-- They were in italics. It seems transferring the story from my Google Doc to the publishing centre removed the italics-- I'll have to ...

Thanks for the review! It was super helpful, and I'll keep ya posted, and return the favour.

Hey there, thanks a lot for the review! Lemme quickly address my stupid mistakes! The two lines "The people mimicked the weather, he supposed. Blunt, coarse and bitter. Savages. Speaking ...

Wow... have some points, Sir!

Thanks for the review! To address your criticism... I can't. This really was just an hour spent throwing down some rhymes to get across my point. I'm alright with obvious ...

Thanks for the review! I never actually got around to the Maze Runner-- Divergent just left me so annoyed with the genre that I crawled back into my Fantasy Book ...