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  • Poetry » Lyrical, Fantasy Re: Don't Fear the Reaper

    The title really drew me in because it made me think of Don't Fear the Reaper by the Blue Oyster Cult which I love. The vibes are like tortured soul/ ...

    May 30, 2025
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Science Fiction Re: Dear Arnold Grace

    This is a really good take on writing letters to your past/ future self. It was a little unclear because from the "And I think I’d like to be a ...

    May 29, 2025
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Ode to Galatea

    I really love this piece! I love Greek mythology and the story of Galatea and Pygmalion is so underrated. I love how you begin it with more well known Greek ...

    May 28, 2025
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: Emotions?

    Initial Thoughts: I really like this piece because it does hit home for some of the confusing topics like feelings. I love your use of rhetorical questions, they really engage ...

    May 28, 2025
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: The Art of Deception.

    Hello! I just wanted to say that I thought your piece was very abstract and original. I like the deep description of the bolded paragraph; it paints a clear picture ...

    Jan 18, 2023
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: A Storm

    I enjoyed this piece. I like how in the first stanza you show a sense of uncertainty yet the message is really clear. "Soft breaths have my hair dancing, Their ...

    Nov 29, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Horror Re: The Bane of Night

    I really like this piece! It leaves so many questions, which makes me want to read more. You said this was from an excerpt of a book you're making, which ...

    Nov 28, 2022


Revision is one of the exquisite pleasures of writing.
— Bernard Malamud