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Re: Don't Fear the Reaper
The title really drew me in because it made me think of Don't Fear the Reaper by the Blue Oyster Cult which I love. The vibes are like tortured soul/ ...
May 30, 2025 -
Re: Dear Arnold Grace
This is a really good take on writing letters to your past/ future self. It was a little unclear because from the "And I think I’d like to be a ...
May 29, 2025 -
Re: Ode to Galatea
I really love this piece! I love Greek mythology and the story of Galatea and Pygmalion is so underrated. I love how you begin it with more well known Greek ...
May 28, 2025 -
Re: Emotions?
Initial Thoughts: I really like this piece because it does hit home for some of the confusing topics like feelings. I love your use of rhetorical questions, they really engage ...
May 28, 2025 -
Re: The Art of Deception.
Hello! I just wanted to say that I thought your piece was very abstract and original. I like the deep description of the bolded paragraph; it paints a clear picture ...
Jan 18, 2023 -
Re: A Storm
I enjoyed this piece. I like how in the first stanza you show a sense of uncertainty yet the message is really clear. "Soft breaths have my hair dancing, Their ...
Nov 29, 2022 -
Re: The Bane of Night
I really like this piece! It leaves so many questions, which makes me want to read more. You said this was from an excerpt of a book you're making, which ...
Nov 28, 2022
