CastlesInTheSky

Thanks so much, Sapphire and everyone else who took time to review. It is vastly appreciated. Here is the edited version: Part II : Chapter 8 Two Years Later... Dad ...

Thanks very much! xxx

Hey, Well I'm glad you didn't take offence. Seeing as the whole thing isn't going to be about celebrities' lives, I might well read on and give you more review ...

Thankyou so much, Sapphire. That was incredibly helpful. I'll edit it on the document I have and then when I have time I'll make the changes to the YWS version ...

Here's a URL to the first part of the story:

Heavily Edited! To read second part, click here:

Thanks jasmine12 Yep, there were two people talking. Thanks for telling me. Aww your grandmother had framed gloves? That's sweet :) Thanks for reviewing! Keep Writing. --Sarah

Thankyou! Salsashanno - I just realised I've been spelling your name wrong all this time...sorry. :D Thanks so much, your comments were extremely motivating. I'm glad you're enjoying it. I ...

Thanks so much Sashalno! Was really helpful!

Thanks so much Sashalno! Was really helpful!

Thankyou so much for reading the chapter, Gee. You were very helpful :D X

Thanks Demeter... will try to condense description. x

Thanks everyone!

Thanks so much. Yep, I'll definetly set right the whole photograph business. You've been really helpful. Sarah xxx

Thanks so much, everyone who reviewed, in particularly jasmine. its been really helpful. thankyou. sarah xxx