Cassandra

I don't know if this is true or not, but the wording is such that the main character appears to be female. I'm not quite sure why, it just screams ...

Thanks so much for reading, Sam! This is actually for school, or supposed to be: the final draft is due on Monday. But I want to keep working with this ...

His lips pulled themselves together in a smirk as he rattled off the place names one after the other, seemingly a circus side show to the rapt crowd of open-mouthed, ...

Hee hee. Hooray for hilarious fanfiction spawned by the YWS Elections 2007! XD

I didn't even notice the date, Snoink. My mistake. XD

Yeah, I agree with Cass on pretty much all of the points. I expected a bigger ending, but I think the thing with his eyes sparkling showed that he had ...

The second batch of lines definitely adds to the poem, the imagery...oh yes. Keep those lines, Clau. I remain incredibly impressed, and can find nothing to pick at in this ...

Does it sound too out there? Not at all! I thought that was what it meant anyway; I was just making sure. And I definitely like made-up words. :D Again, ...

I know what you mean about POV and tense--I can never really decide. So far I'm liking it the way you have it, but you may decide to change it ...

Thanks, Kay and Skye! I think I'm going to go through and add more about my experience on the second draft. I'm just not sure which of the factual stuff ...

That clears it all up then. Pretty cool! And as I said before, your description is so yummy to read! Nice work. :D

That makes sense--I thought it was lacking something! But I guess I was kind of afraid of adding too much of myself into the article and not enough fact.... Gah. ...

without giving a hippogriffs hindquarters about how I look Nice. XD The two of us made our way painstakingly slowly down the stairs to the common room, pausing before actually ...

Nice idea, Snoink. This will be fun. :D

Wow, Snoink. Just wow. XD