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CarsonTheArson

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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Necromancer's Reckoning: Prologue

    Cool :) I will get to that soon

    Apr 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Necromancer's Reckoning: Prologue

    Awesome :) Can't wait to read it!

    Apr 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Other Re: My friend the pig

    Aww, that's adorable. You guys make a great team :)

    Apr 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Other Re: My friend the pig

    XD This is so cute! "He has amazing teeth." Favorite line :) I don't see much to critique, I just though this was quite an adorable little poem. Very nice ...

    Apr 26, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Why a Rose?

    Beautiful :3 This is really great, good job!

    Apr 24, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Humor Re: Don't Trust the Damsels

    Thanks :)

    Apr 24, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Humor Re: Don't Trust the Damsels

    Thanks :)

    Apr 24, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Humor Re: Don't Trust the Damsels

    Hello :) I get what you are saying about showing what's going on instead of telling. I'm definitely gonna do more with this soon. Thanks for the review :)

    Apr 23, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Humor Re: Don't Trust the Damsels

    I totally agree with you about more detail and showing. I plan to go back and work on this, so I will later have a much better story here :) ...

    Apr 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Why I hate the past tense.

    So many emotions! Time for a feel trip... You are a brilliant writer, and I have loved all of your works. Never stop writing!!

    Apr 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Culture, Lyrical Re: The princess with cancer.

    You know, after reading your five inch heels story yesterday and this one today, I've become a fan. Both of these pieces are beautiful and worthy of the attention they ...

    Apr 7, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Literature Re: [Insert Creative Title Here]

    Thanks :D

    Mar 29, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Literature Re: [Insert Creative Title Here]

    Thanks :) A lot of people have said all the 'insert ... here's were kinda annoying, which I completely got. I even got annoyed! Glad you understand it. Glad you ...

    Mar 29, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Literature Re: [Insert Creative Title Here]

    Thanks :)

    Mar 29, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Literature Re: [Insert Creative Title Here]

    Glad you enjoyed it :D I had a lot of fun writing this ^_^

    Mar 29, 2014


I tell the neophyte: Write a million words–the absolute best you can write, then throw it all away and bravely turn your back on what you have written. At that point, you’re ready to begin.
— David Eddings