CarolineNaveen

Hey it’s Caroline N. here with your continued review. So sorry it took me so long to get to this, but I have been really swamped with school and work ...

Hey it’s Caroline N. here with your continued review. So sorry it took me so long to get to this, but I have been really swamped with school and work ...

Hey it’s Caroline N. here with your requested review. So sorry it took me so long to get to this, but I have been really swamped with school and work ...

Hey Caroline N. here for a review. (You requested a review on my thread several weeks ago.) I apologize for not having a chance to review it until now. To ...

Maverick Odin I gripped the knife tightly in my hand. Despite having done this before, my heart pounded and I could feel my blood pumping adrenaline through my veins, sending ...

Title hmmm Subtitle interesting Lady Sunspoon: Tousdale! Hey! Tousdale! That’s quite a mouthful to open a show or movie with as their sort of abnormal names and a little bit ...

It seems like a great script! I'm not a big commidy script reader or writer so it is a little difficult fore me to judge this one effectly. Here it ...

I'll begin with I like the concept idea. The formatting by the way is great there were a few slip ups here and there, but I would love to know ...

I am going to agree with Smilykid's review in the way that there are some moments that you can work on to bring out some emotion. The first world war ...

Hi there! First off this says this is your first script and for a first attempt. Please know that I liked it and what is included in this review is ...

Hey great job! So I've been having a review day and my initial thought was, "Oh, no it's long," (admit it we've all done that) but that's alright because you ...

Okay I'm back after this one I'll be done so I don't spam your notifications lol. I was a little disappointed to see you don't have any more historical fiction ...

First off I read one of your other short stories and I feel obligated to say you have a gift with writing action. Constructive: You could add more detail to ...

I just posted a piece/script about war myself and I found this to be interesting to read. Constructive: Character Development. Unfortunately since this is a short story you didn't have ...

Alright first things first. Constructive critiques, at the beginning of the story I seemed to drown in names and was a little confused as all of the names seemed to ...