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Carina

  • Poetry » Other, General Re: i wish to write, i wish to fish.

    Thank you!

    Jul 11, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: i wish to write, i wish to fish.

    heh, thanks! Though you pretty much answered the question yourself: this piece is very raw. Emotional/good pieces have so much detail, elegant words, and perfect grammar. Often times people think ...

    Jul 10, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: i wish to write, i wish to fish.

    Haha, sure. But if it relates to interpretation or meaning, then I'm afraid I can't directly answer that. ;)

    Jul 10, 2015
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: Don't Lose Me

    You're very welcome! Glad I could help. As for the time skips, I think something like, "They walked in silence for what seemed like forever," would have sufficed, at the ...

    Jun 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: A Potion to Make You Smarter

    ;)

    Jul 29, 2014
  • Short Story » Narrative, Humor Re: Her time of the month

    Just thought I'd share that this was a fun, cute piece to read. At first I thought you were using figurative language, but then I realized it was meant to ...

    Jun 18, 2014
  • Short Story » Satire, Humor Re: Suicide Boy

    Just so ya know, I died a lil inside when you wrote that viola death scene...

    Jun 5, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Rainy Days

    No problem!

    May 26, 2014
  • Short Story » General, Other Re: Flight

    No problem! :D

    May 26, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Other Re: The Violist

    Just wanted to say... “Well, first of all, it's not a violin, it's a viola. There's a difference. I CAN RELATE SO BAD. Lemme know when you have the next ...

    May 22, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Urge to Jump

    This isn't really a review, but I just thought I'd say that I love your writing style. This is a beautiful and bittersweet piece, and I'd love to read more ...

    Feb 5, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Romantic Re: Wooden Spears

    Whoa, this is so old. XD But yes! Of course you may. The only thing I'm concerned about is the switch of style. The little blurb I wrote in the ...

    Jan 21, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Elegy of Flight: Chapter One (Did you hear?)

    noooooo waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay

    Sep 13, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Elegy of Flight: Chapter One (Did you hear?)

    Why can I not take this seriously.

    Sep 13, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Spark - Ch. 1

    np bby

    Aug 17, 2013


Find a place inside where there's joy, and the joy will burn out the pain.
— Joseph Campbell