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  • Short Story » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: True Happiness

    Hi Helena, and (a late) welcome to YWS! The other reviewer already touched the same notes I was going to bring up: this story has a lot of potential, the ...

    Jan 24, 2018
  • Short Story » Horror, Realistic Re: 2.

    I have to echo the reviewer before me: wow . With the title just being a number and the horror genre not taking into effect until the end, this piece ...

    Jan 16, 2018
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: Broken Steps

    Hiii! Nice to see you crawl back to YWS to post this lovely short story. :) I admit that this short was first kind of hard to get into since ...

    Jan 16, 2018
  • Short Story » Humor, Horror Re: An Apartment Conversation.

    Hiya, and welcome to YWS! A humor and horror short caught me eye, so I thought I'd give this a read and leave a review. Now that was an interesting ...

    Jan 16, 2018
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: A Day in the Life

    Heya! This has been in the Green Room for a couple of days so I thought I've give ya another review. I know this is for a contest, and even ...

    Jan 16, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Humor Re: Conics Unfortunately: 6

    Ahhh, now this is some nice fluffy fluff that that melts right in my mouth (eyes?) when reading it. (I may be thinking about cotton candy right now...) This chapter ...

    Jan 12, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Humor Re: Conics Unfortunately: 5

    (a future meme wheelchair boy will send to Ellipse) I thought this chapter started out a little slow. Half of the chapter was spent trying to get to siren's ship. ...

    Jan 9, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Humor Re: Conics Unfortunately: 4

    Funny story: I didn't realize my two-hour lab was cancelled today so now I'm derping around until my next class. So, looks like I'll be reviewing two chapters today to ...

    Jan 9, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Humor Re: Conics Unfortunately: 3

    Back for the third chapter! Now this was all a pleasant surprise. :o Chapter 1 and 2 must be like a prologue, of sorts *applauds* and it was well done! ...

    Jan 8, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Humor Re: Conics Unfortunately: 2

    Yo! Back again for a review. From here on out, I'll be reviewing content, such as what parts could use some work, and what parts deserve some praisin'. You've got ...

    Jan 6, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Humor Re: Conics Unfortunately: 1

    Why hello! I'm making it a goal to do at least 4 reviews/week, so I was on the lookout for interesting novels that update daily. Your story caught my eye ...

    Jan 4, 2018
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Realistic Re: Please Ensure You Are of Sound Mind Before Making This Demon Deal

    Heya! I'm (temporarily) stalking shorts lately and this one caught me eye. You have a very interesting writing style; I like it! Your writing is so smooth and natural, and ...

    Jan 3, 2018
  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: Her from the Bus

    Heya! It's been a heckuva long time since I did a review, and I was feeling some sappy romance shorts today, and thought this one deserved a review. I'd first ...

    Jan 2, 2018
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: Don't Lose Me

    Hey, MissSugarPink! I was really craving reading and reviewing romance short stories, so I thought I'd drop by. Although this piece was pretty long, I am not disappointed. It sure ...

    Jun 25, 2015
  • Article / Essay » Romantic, General Re: A letter to the girl I'm so in love with

    Hey Tamtam! I'm actually on a hiatus and haven't reviewed for a very long time, but the work's title on the literary spotlight caught my attention. Before I start, I ...

    Mar 4, 2015


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— Madeleine L'Engle, A Wrinkle in Time