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Re: True Happiness
Hi Helena, and (a late) welcome to YWS! The other reviewer already touched the same notes I was going to bring up: this story has a lot of potential, the ...
Jan 24, 2018 -
Re: 2.
I have to echo the reviewer before me: wow . With the title just being a number and the horror genre not taking into effect until the end, this piece ...
Jan 16, 2018 -
Re: Broken Steps
Hiii! Nice to see you crawl back to YWS to post this lovely short story. :) I admit that this short was first kind of hard to get into since ...
Jan 16, 2018 -
Re: An Apartment Conversation.
Hiya, and welcome to YWS! A humor and horror short caught me eye, so I thought I'd give this a read and leave a review. Now that was an interesting ...
Jan 16, 2018 -
Re: A Day in the Life
Heya! This has been in the Green Room for a couple of days so I thought I've give ya another review. I know this is for a contest, and even ...
Jan 16, 2018 -
Re: Conics Unfortunately: 6
Ahhh, now this is some nice fluffy fluff that that melts right in my mouth (eyes?) when reading it. (I may be thinking about cotton candy right now...) This chapter ...
Jan 12, 2018 -
Re: Conics Unfortunately: 5
(a future meme wheelchair boy will send to Ellipse) I thought this chapter started out a little slow. Half of the chapter was spent trying to get to siren's ship. ...
Jan 9, 2018 -
Re: Conics Unfortunately: 4
Funny story: I didn't realize my two-hour lab was cancelled today so now I'm derping around until my next class. So, looks like I'll be reviewing two chapters today to ...
Jan 9, 2018 -
Re: Conics Unfortunately: 3
Back for the third chapter! Now this was all a pleasant surprise. :o Chapter 1 and 2 must be like a prologue, of sorts *applauds* and it was well done! ...
Jan 8, 2018 -
Re: Conics Unfortunately: 2
Yo! Back again for a review. From here on out, I'll be reviewing content, such as what parts could use some work, and what parts deserve some praisin'. You've got ...
Jan 6, 2018 -
Re: Conics Unfortunately: 1
Why hello! I'm making it a goal to do at least 4 reviews/week, so I was on the lookout for interesting novels that update daily. Your story caught my eye ...
Jan 4, 2018 -
Re: Please Ensure You Are of Sound Mind Before Making This Demon Deal
Heya! I'm (temporarily) stalking shorts lately and this one caught me eye. You have a very interesting writing style; I like it! Your writing is so smooth and natural, and ...
Jan 3, 2018 -
Re: Her from the Bus
Heya! It's been a heckuva long time since I did a review, and I was feeling some sappy romance shorts today, and thought this one deserved a review. I'd first ...
Jan 2, 2018 -
Re: Don't Lose Me
Hey, MissSugarPink! I was really craving reading and reviewing romance short stories, so I thought I'd drop by. Although this piece was pretty long, I am not disappointed. It sure ...
Jun 25, 2015 -
Re: A letter to the girl I'm so in love with
Hey Tamtam! I'm actually on a hiatus and haven't reviewed for a very long time, but the work's title on the literary spotlight caught my attention. Before I start, I ...
Mar 4, 2015
