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CapybarasAndCoffee

CapybarasAndCoffee

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Chapter 1 Matthew

    Hey! I'm going to review as I read! 😀 I love the beginning "He was excited to go back home, after working from morning to noon he would finally get ...

    Apr 5, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Recipe for Disaster

    Hello there!!! I really like this. If I had to describe it in 3 words I would say Unique, Interesting, and Unexpected. Why Unique? I love how you actually put ...

    Apr 5, 2024
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: A Short Poem for the Stars

    This is such a beautiful poem I feel like this is one of those cases where less is more. I am honestly a fan of astronomy so I love it!!! ...

    Apr 4, 2024
  • Poetry » Chickens, General Re: The Haiku's Predicament

    This haiku is well-written and follows the traditional 5-7-5 syllable pattern. You used a metaphor of a carriage to describe the haiku as a form of poetry that is elegant ...

    Mar 11, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Are we alone?

    The poem explores the existential questions of loneliness, existence, and uniqueness from a personal and cosmic perspective. The poem is structured as a series of rhetorical questions, each one expand

    Mar 11, 2024
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Lucky Stars

    The poem is a nostalgic and melancholic reflection on the meaning of the lucky stars that the speaker used to make and give away. The lucky stars are a metaphor ...

    Mar 10, 2024


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