CaptainStack

Most appreciated!

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Thank you very much! I have always struggled with too much description! I'm working on it!

First of all, thank you so much for this review. It has been a huge help! For the first bit of crit, I have to agree with the idea that ...

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Thank you so much. I will pay attention to these Crits when writing in future :)

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Most certainly not. If you get the time, i would greatly appreciate it if you could check some of my work out. I am new to this site so any ...

Beautiful theme and flow of story development. At most you should watch your rhythm as well as your choice of rhyming words, but over all, this is beautiful. Really transported ...