CannonBallBaker

Hi CannonBall! So, I like this. The syntax, in my opinion adds to the poem. I saw where you said that what you've posted is from Italian, so I won't ...

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I love the first stanza because besides its powerful phrasing I was left with the dual interpretation of being lightninged and of sinning from every "side" at the same time. ...

i will repeat it again. I am Italian, it is obvious that it is not grammatically correct in English. these translations are made by a machine translation, taken from Italian. ...

Smirks the fireball launched from evil, walking sloppy, approached her. People flee from the horrible cruelty that pierces the air, a cry is widespread, but the man does not perceive ...

Hello, buddy! :D I understood the poem, and I can't locate the grammar errors! o___o But I guess it's because Italian and Spanish are a bit alike, so I'll leave ...

I become matters of eternal,The memory is lost, spreadingat a speed of a cloud destructive, This part doesnt make any sense to me. I dont understand the part "cloud destructive"? ...