CandyVille

yea.. ok well thanks everybody!

thanks for being critical! i apretiate the help WHOLE lot!

lol! the im gonna get to work on it but i really dont like the next chapters :( but ya know. i was having a writers block this summer when ...

thanks! i appretiate ur suggestions and i'll get toto work on it

thanks for your help! i have always been in a hurry when i type this onto youngwriters because either i'm at school or my parents are yelling at me to ...

okay thanks... thisa i also typed in school so there are many errors.. and i mean, THIS WAS JUST AN IDEA THAT POPPED (oops caps was on) into my head ...

thanks for your help.. i was at school when i typed this and in a hurryso there ar a few mistakes. i might either make this a prolouge ( please ...

thanks! havent had time to type up chapter 3.... ummm.... u see it says in chptr. 1 see in chaptr 1... it says tht central high is where poor ppl ...

thanks!oops didnt see my spelling errors i was in a hurry i typed it during lunch at scholl so yeah..... i have been thinking to stretch it out and i ...

i really like it!!! :)

well thkis one is really short... the other's aren't as short... i might make this the prolouge or something.... but the others are a bit longer