Calligraphy

Thanks for the comment! Are there places in the work you felt had too much detail?

Thanks for all the reviews!

*likes*

Can I use these in my next novel? ^_^

I really liked this; as a girl it was nice to get a boy's perspective on things. Plus, you managed to cover a deep subject, yet keep your poetry mind ...

Hey, after the edit this is much better! I can't really write a proper review because there isn't much wrong with this. I think it is a lot more realistic ...

Hi volleyball! I'm back for another review since you edited. Okay this is so much better than before it isn't even funny. When I first started writing I was horrible ...

Thank you BlueAfrica for telling me something I can improve on! When you said this I went back and looked at a few of the poems I have written recently, ...

Thanks for everyone who reviewed this! I hope that my edits and the edits of my friend ultraviolet (who is amazing at grammar) have made this a bit better. I'm ...

Thanks for all the reviews guys! I am editing today. Birdy, that is awesome.

Thanks Cookie, I don't think my story is that good though. What don't you like about it? What could I improve on?

Thankyou skinsy! I love your rambling and you always make sense to me. Even if it ends up you didn't mean what I thought you did. XD You also do ...

Thanks pink! I will edit edit edit XD

Thank you for the review! You helped me!

Brilliant. 'Nuff said. (I'm sorry I couldn't actually review this)