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Re: A Shot of Arrogance (Prologue)
Hey skins, so I can see you have a lot of chapters up, I just want to let you know I haven't read the storyline or any of the other ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Warriors: Plain and Simple
Hi stori, I was into these books for a while and I really liked them. Because this is so short I don’t have a lot to say but here goes: ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Agony in a receptacle.
Hi Nihasa! I hope you are enjoying it around the site so far. I am not sure what this is meant to be. I have the feeling of an introduction ...
Apr 29, 2011 -
Re: Only Natural
Hi, Tori, I just want to say right now that I haven't done a good review in a while and I am trying to get back into the zone. This ...
Apr 29, 2011 -
Re: Mummy's Little Bear
Tenyo, every time I read one of your pieces I am amazed. You always come off so strong! But I suppose being 100 years old you have had a lot ...
Apr 28, 2011 -
Re: .
Hi. O.K. so lets get right to reviewing. Note: I haven't read the other reviews so sorry if I repeat things. The first thing that I noticed is that you ...
Apr 27, 2011 -
Re: Torn Paper
Hi GoaGreena, I really can relate to this. What you described is exactly something I would do; my mind is always wandering. One thing that wasn't good here was your ...
Apr 21, 2011 -
Re: Faded Whisper
First of all: WOOHOO *does dance* you got Pink's 600th review! And that rhymes! Hey Jessa, I have seen you around the site before, but I don't think I have ...
Apr 13, 2011 -
Re: Tangled Affection
I liked this, it was short and sweet and you effectively showed the characters. I especially liked how you weren't afraid to put a lot of description in. My one ...
Apr 7, 2011 -
Re: number 1.
Hey Jess, I hope you are enjoying it here. This is pretty short so it will be a bit hard for me to review. First here are some nitpicks: You ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: My Aborted Child
Hey purple. This was really good, and there isn't much you can improve on. I liked how you showed your characters. I feel like I knew them. I also liked ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: One by One (chapter 1)
Hi flower. It is good to see you again. I know you have been a member for a while so I don't have to explain how to, but you might ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Carnation Milk
I agree with MilkNCookies that you should rate this, but I do love the poem. I really think you should expand on this. Describe how you make Carnation Milk. I ...
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: If Only I Could Live In a Dream
Alright, so because this poem isn't completely finished I can't give you my true opinion on it, but I will try. I am glad you told us it wasn't finished ...
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: Time travel.
Hi flyinginvisible. I love your name by the way. I hope you are enjoying the site so far. I also hope that my review doesn't scare you off. Sometimes I ...
Mar 30, 2011
