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Re: Story of My Life: Surviving Middle School
Hi Jb! Is this the first thing you have posted so far on the site? Do you like what you see around here so far? It'll take a while to ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: Project Electrocode Chapter 1
Hi Fire! This certainly has left me very, very interested! I can't wait to read more. You wrote a chapter that made the reader want more. A lot of people ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: Shoulder The Veil
Hey, what is this for? *hint, hint, nudge, nudge* O.K. yes I admit I know exactly what it is for, but come on. You should tell people so the contest ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: Fly free
Hi PoetryQueen! From your name I gather that you write poetry more than prose. XD It is great that you are expanding your writing interests. Every writer needs to play ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: Privileged Few
Hi Maybe! So, I really think you did a good job when working with that song. Though it is good there really isn't a ton of depth to it, and ...
Jun 18, 2011 -
Re: The Camp [pt. 1]
Hi Elli. Well, if you wanted me to be on my best behavior for the rest of the day you succeeded. ;) This was a very spooky beginning and I ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: The Potential Student: A monologue
Hey Warrior! I loved this. It made me laugh and you showed great skills in keeping in character. What gave you the idea of this? I would love to know. ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: An adventurer's pride [Chapter 2: Yates the mystery man]
Hey Spoons. I don't have a lot of time to write this, so I am going to get right down to the review. I hope I am not too harsh; ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: The Morning Cha Cha
Hi Gaga! I really liked this poem. It wasn't very in-depth, but every poem doesn't have to be filled with strong emotions. There are three main parts to poem, voice/tone, ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: Check Twice - Act 1, Scene 1
Hi ultraviolet, this isn't going to be too long because it is late and I don't usually don't review scripts. But because you are forcing me to write it I ...
May 25, 2011 -
Re: Sometimes (working title) Chapter seven
Hi xDudettex! This whole twin thing is really creepy! I am sorry this took me so long to get to, but I am here now. It seems that each time ...
May 24, 2011 -
Re: Fakebook-Chapter 4
Hi ankitjain. I see you haven't been receiving a tone of reviews on your work. The first way to help wit this is review more yourself. You only have one ...
May 20, 2011 -
Re: Wings (revised 2)
This is really good Leebass. I haven't read the earlier versions, but I can tell you worked hard on this. But if you are willing to read one more review ...
May 14, 2011 -
Re: Run, Fat Boy, Run! Part 1
Hi BBB. I actually really liked this. Your style was natural, straight forward, and refreshing. I have always wanted to write a novel length memoir, so I would love to ...
May 14, 2011 -
Re: Sometimes (working title) Chapter six
Hi xDudettex! I am finally here. Sorry that you had to wait so long. I really liked this chapter and I don't think I am going to give a very ...
May 14, 2011
