Calligraphy

And with the wind are gone Dance of fire These two lines make no sense to me. Overall I feel as if you wrote two lines at a time to ...

Just to let you know I didn't read the short story. General comments: Floating. Fast and Aimless. I never really pictured a black hole as fast more just nothingness. Conserving. ...

Joseph From day one, I knew you were something special. The truth spoke through your eyes. It taught my me confidence, It showed me truth. hmmmm so the truth in ...

Love: Love leaves scars to learn from; This does make way more sense, sorry. love leaves care to open. Love gives hope to believe in , love delivers a key ...

Dear God, Once upon a time, This line is really unneeded and does not give the fairy tail affect you were going for. There was a girl And she was ...

as the schoolbell shrieks, You never say what happens as the school bell shrieks... unless you are jumping to the bathroom scene in the middle of a stanza. a shrill ...

I hate this pain My tears fall like rain I scream in the night No one hears me fight I can not give in Pain will not win I can ...

I dream of the nothingness and of the pain. Under an unwelcoming shelter of an endless sea of trees, where the silence is an overwhelming burden to bare. Where the ...

My earphones are weights, This just sounded odd to me. I've never heard someone say earphones before only headphones... their sounds bear no relief Sounds is an o.K. word, but ...

Hi, and welcome to the site. I hope to see you around. I am sorry If my review is harsh. Walking in lonely roads, i I feel lost . Haters ...

The Things You Never Knew It's not who I am, but what I do, that decides for you, All the things you never knew. This caught my attention just because ...

What does BVB stand for? Sorry, I am stupid. Also I am sorry if I got the whole concept of this poem wring. It would really ruin my review. Please ...

Well, I don't have any grammar issues, but I am terrible at grammar. I really liked this and don't feel like I can help you that much. You are a ...

I sit in the bottom of the shower And let the water clean me of your kisses. It’s been five months But I can’t get your scent off me. I ...

I also thought it was was five syllables, seven, and then five again. I really like this poem, but because it is so short it is hard to review. The ...