Calandra

Greetings. I am not a very religious person, but I'll give this a go. It's always great to learn more about other people and what they believe. If I do ...

Greetings. I don't have much to say about the delivery, it's good. The clarity is fine, as I can understand most things here and the ones I can't are my ...

Greetings. I gauge the time by your shoes. The word "by" doesn't really make sense here. Something like "with" or even "of" wouldn't seem so awkward in that context. There's ...

Greetings. If I can go without seeing someone beg my mama to post foot pics, or an idiot talking as if they know my mama’s life better than I do, ...

Greetings. I hate to jump into something right in the middle of it, but I'll free you from the Green Room. "I can't open my eyes any wider than a ...

Greetings. "It's changed a lot too. The ground is littered with trash and dirt. My shoes will never be the same" are a lot of similar sentences. I also see ...

Greetings. "She really had started to think she’d been going insane; hallucinating noises and imagining that her eyes had been magically transformed into a color different than they should be" ...

Greetings once again. "She had grown up watching her mom slip in and out of meetings without anyone eves batting an eye – despite her mom being the most important ...

Greetings. I see a few bits of passive voice misuse. Not that it's a bad thing, but people try to avoid it sometimes. "His suspicions were immediately confirmed" is an ...

Greetings. I don't want to hang on plot / topic too much, but "Girl meets best friend's boyfriend. Girl falls for him" is a tad bit overused. Sure, sure, sure, ...