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Caitlynn

  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual Re: Life: Spider Web

    A very simple poem, explained so well in so few words. However the words you wrote here do ring true, you used simple words, constructing a very nice, and yet ...

    Dec 17, 2018
  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: In My Dreams

    A very relatable and toughing piece. I can say that I've been there, and know many others who have, however the piece is a little rough, the words not slowly ...

    Dec 17, 2018
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: Queen of Heart

    An awesome poem and I thoroughly enjoyed. The word choices were extremely lovely, and it had wonderful imagery, it flows with a very nice rhythm, and the words add a ...

    Dec 17, 2018
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Without Sanity

    I love the imagery this poem provide, and I do love this part Without this respectable way of life, "We will be ostracized, We will be sacrificed To be the ...

    Dec 17, 2018


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