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Re: The Pizza Guy
I appreciated this because I'm hungry and love pizza. I feel like you're missing the most fun part of Dominoe's (besides the pizza) - the tracking app! Haha, what's more ...
Sep 7, 2015 -
Re: Scared of My Shadow
Hey there! So, for a rhyming poem, I actually liked this quite a bit. I'm generally quite nitpicky on rhyming but, for the most part, you made it work, and ...
Jul 3, 2014 -
Re: She called
So this is a highly interpret-able piece which I found extremely enjoyable to read. I can't say I know what it means at nearly midnight on very little sleep but ...
Jul 3, 2014 -
Re: One Twin
This was a cute idea. I quite enjoyed your poem! I do have some comments though. First of all, I like how you started the poem. It was a good ...
May 12, 2014 -
Re: I rearranged my vocabulary for you.
Wow! So this was beautiful. I imagined it would be from your title and certainly I'm not disappointed. This isn't your run-of-the-mill wronged romance sort of poem, which I enjoy. ...
May 12, 2014 -
Re: Dreaming Wide Awake
This was a good poem which I felt was quite relatable! Perhaps because it is rather vague about the other person (girl, one later finds out, of course), or because ...
May 3, 2014 -
Re: The Prince Who Charmed Himself
I feel like this poem has a wonderful idea and might say a lot about society (if you apply it to modern narcissism). I enjoyed the ending - "May he ...
Apr 30, 2014
