CainTheDoomed

I have to agree with the ones below. It is overall beautiful atmosphere it brings. Showing the complete understanding of the season, showing her emotions throughout. In the Summer, it ...

Lovely repetition of 'Why' at the beginning of the stanza's. Also lovely way you organise your stanza's into 4 lines each. In a pattern of A - B - B ...

I like how it is set as something free, not set out in like a pattern. This shows freedom within your text as you can write poetry about something you ...

Lovely repetition throughout the part of 'The world'. I love the use of 2nd person. Saying that it is us that will be sentenced due to it. I already love ...

Lovely description, and detail. It brings out what actually happening and makes me feel like I am experiencing it from where I am. The paragraphs are well spaced out through ...