Cailey

Agh! YWS! Why do you hate me? This is NOT supposed to be one huge block. There are supposed to be spaces and lines and paragraphs!!

Hey there, thanks for the review. I actually didn't have any intention of adding on to this. I also don't like fanfictions, since I have way too many ideas of ...

Hey there, thanks for the review! I was rushing, since for this piece I was just letting my words write themselves. Also, I meant to make it sound like the ...

Thank you!!! I did use a bit of repetition here. I'll have to avoid that...

Sorry, but I think Red won. :D

Thank you!! I wanted to add rhyming, but was in a hurry and didn't want to take the time to figure it out. And I can't believe I wrote tubes ...

Thank you for the review. :) I will take your considerations to heart, if not for this poem then for the next one I write.

Thank you very much for the review. Most of my YWS poems are pretty quickly written, so I usually don't take time to make them really good and use a ...

Thank you for the review! I am planning on rewriting this eventually, especially the first stanza. Thanks for your thoughts.

Thanks, this is actually not the first chapter. It's somewhere in the middle of the novel, which is already finished but I won't be posting on YWS. Thanks for the ...

Hm, I think I might just go and rewrite this with more stereotypes. Although, I don't have braces anymore.. :D

Thank you!! :)

Thank you! I've had several comments on that sentence, I'm just too lazy to fix it on this version. I guess I should...

Thanks! I meant to go through it again in search of typos, thanks for pointing them out!

Hey, thanks! I was wondering how to end this, I wasn't quite satisfied with either of my first two endings. I love the idea of adding some touch of magic ...