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Re: Risk ch 9
Hey! Knight Cailey here with a review. I read up to the italicized part, but it seemed like that part went into an entirely different part of the story, and ...
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Re: Sons of Courage Book 1 Chapter 2 Caring for Kanufu; finishing the job.
Hey there my fellow Knight! :D Haja, so I'm really out of order with these stories. But I am going back to get the beginning chapters that I missed. :) ...
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Re: Luster
hey there, Knight Cailey here with a review on this lovely, if long, review day. I like this poem a lot, there is tons of imagery and details and description- ...
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Re: Chapter 2: Sanctuary
Hey there, Knight Cailey here on review day to give you a review! I think you have a really nice style of writing. It's easy to read and easy to ...
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Re: Wordsmithing: The Circle of Philosophy
Hey there, and Knight Cailey again, reviewing/ responding to another essay of yours. I like this little Wordsmithing essay collection? articles? thing. that you've started. My first thing with this ...
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Re: operation imperial ch-14
Hey there! Knight Cailey here with a review. I know that I read and reviewed a part of this sometime back, but I can't remember which part it was. But ...
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Re: Wordsmithing: It's Time For Show and Tell!
Hey there! Knight Cailey here with somewhat of a review or response on this piece. It will be difficult to review an essay that seems like it was mostly meant ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Jonathon Six (Chapter One, Part One)
Hey there! Knight Cailey here to review this beginning chapter on this lovely review day. I really like your writing style; it's very easy to read and understand. Your words ...
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Re: Aokigahara
Oh. I most definitely love to dissect. And nitpicking and carping is my job. Especially on your work. :D Just kidding, you know I always love everything you write. But- ...
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Re: We're fine
Oh man! I love this! So powerful, with so much emotion behind it. I really loved the candy references that carried out through the whole piece. It tied the poem ...
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Re: Just Like The World
hey there! Happy review day! I love the theme of this piece. I know, as a believer in Christ, that I often look at the church in the US and ...
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Re: New Face of Humanity
Hey there! Knight Cailey here to review your piece. I like the theme here, I think it can be something really meaningful and really important. It's something that matters- and ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: story success
Hey there, Knight Cailey here with a review on this nice review day. I love story ideas, and I am always coming up with ideas for new stories and poems ...
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Re: I'll Face Myself
Hello! Knight Cailey here with a review on this lovely review day. First of all, I must say that I really enjoyed the quick rhythm of this piece. It was ...
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Re: Bound In Leather
Hey there! Happy review day fellow Defaulty. :) I usually avoid short stories and novels when reviewing, and get to them towards the end of review day, but I kept ...
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