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hey there! I read this, then I read it again. I'm still not quite sure what is the decisive use of this prologue is. On the one hand you introduce ...

Hey Orion, forgive the blank post below, I'm not used to this tablet. With that said, onto the review. I'd like to start off by saying that this is very ...

Hey there! I'll be reviewing your piece this fine evening. I'd like to start off by commenting on your character's voice. I haven't read your previous part, so I apologize ...

The last verse caught me entirely by surprise. I was expecting this to be a truly grandiose tribute to mankind's intellect, but no, that cynical final observation -- which I ...

Hey there! First off. Where are they? Who is your first character, other than a naive little boy? You're lacking details here. Backstory, setting, everything. You should stop for a ...

Hey there Sushi! Let's get right down to the review. Not bad intro, not bad at all. To me though it was misleading. I was not expecting a sixteen year ...

Hey there! I feel like prologues where the author goes in depth on a topic and ends with 'my name is x and this is my story' are kind of ...

Hey meg! I'll be reviewing this today. First off, I congratulate you on your -- as far as I can see -- impeccable grammar. I also commend the emotive impact ...

So! I promised a review, did I not? Well, here I am. My first impression wasn't a very positive one. There is absolutely nothing I see in Kat that makes ...

But really though, Blackwood does have a point. It's fine when a novel has a lot of characters, but that also makes things very hard to pull off. The Lain ...

Ninety percent of this makes little sense. The other ten percent is Black Butler. Congratulations. Your sentences are usually too run-on and horrible, riddled with a series of otherwise small ...

Hey Star! Why is this a prologue? Like, it could just as easily be your first chapter. Regardless however, I feel like you could expand on this. For example, the ...

Hey there! I love your style. Everything of the piece was quite well-written in my opinion, I liked it very much. You do have some grammatical errors, mostly in spacing ...

Hey there! You had good grammar in this short. It has potential to be quite good. However, at the moment I feel it was rather bland. There's not enough emotion ...

Hey there Roundsquare! First off, I commend you on your nearly perfect grammar. I say nearly because the flow of the piece is sometimes jarred by your improper use of ...